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Verse 1
I searched for the truth in your eyes once
But what was there is now gone
Falling in between the tides
For a time I thought you were the one
But you were right and I was wrong
Somehow in this place you still belong
Now that you’re gone I can breathe the air
But you would never know that I still care
You push me away
Why am I still standing there?
I never thought we would come to this

Chorus
I don’t know what I had until it
Slips through my hands
But the beauty I hold is in the
Moment I told you goodbye
I don’t know what I saw until it
Walks away through the closed door
If you don’t give me some sign
I’ll run out of reasons to try
I don’t know what I need until it
Shines its light on me
You know me like the wind blowing
Across the ocean so I guess
I’ll have to wait for another season to cry

Verse 2
I turn around and you were never far
But now that feeling is gone
Lost in between the tides
Now were so far apart I don’t know
Who you are
I don’t know where to stop to start
To find the hand that has the fire
To warm my soul
My day is so long
And I don’t understand why
I can’t find the feeling of wanting to belong
I’m lost like a dried rose petal falling from the sky
My heart has me entangled in a spider’s web

Chorus
I don’t know what I had until it
Slips through my hands
But the beauty I hold is in the
Moment I told you goodbye
I don’t know what I saw until it
Walks away through the closed door
If you don’t give me some sign
I’ll run out of reasons to try
I don’t know what I need until it
Shines its light on me
You know me like the wind blowing
Across the ocean so I guess
I’ll have to wait for another season to cry
©2005-2009 ~waitingintheshadows
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:iconaqua-rat:
Falling in between the tides
Lost in between the tides
These are my favourite lines - it's a pleasing recurring theme that I would have liked to have seen more of in the poem.

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THIS IS THE GATE OF HEAVEN. ENTER YE ALL BY THIS DOOR. (This door is kept locked because of the draught - please use side door.)
:iconshewolf-of-the-night:
very well done. nicely written :hug:

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“ Live loving life, love living life and in life love living ”
:iconwaitingintheshadows:
thank you very much.. what did you like about it?

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why is the rum always gone!!!
:iconwaitingintheshadows:
Thank you very much... what did you think of it?

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why is the rum always gone!!!
:iconwaitingintheshadows:
What did you like about it?

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why is the rum always gone!!!
:iconlaiaratoiel:
It's lovely. The chorus is absolutely beautiful, as is the line "My heart has me entangled in a spider’s web".

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As One They Blind Me
:iconwaitingintheshadows:
Thank you very much Amy.... what did you like about it?

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why is the rum always gone!!!
:iconlaiaratoiel:
Didn't I just tell you? =P

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As One They Blind Me

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